Onto Page 5 now - which originally looked like this:-
And my "pencils" of the same:-
In which we are introduced to Station Manager Sheppard - and Montone....
I wonder how deliberate each character's names are on the part of Peter Hyams?
I mean after all - almost anyone else in the story acts just like a sheep following orders blindly with Sheppard leading the flock and the one character who you think might just have a few shades of grey to start off with - but turns out at the end to show his real colours (as being black and white) is Montone!
Speaking of black and white - this might look a bit better with some ink on top of it - mind you that's not a promise!