As in Sterankos original, we have monitor screens superimposed over the big bottom panel to indicate that those are the things that O'neil is looking at through the camera - and each monitor has tiny immaculate white lines across it
My best guess is Sternako drew the picture and then put the white lines on afterwards - well I am no good with white line, certainly not that good as the lines are so thin they are almost invisible
Last time I tackled the problem, I decided to do my own thing - so I have done similar here...
Only this time I thought it would better if i did the lines consistently as each screen over laps each other and kind of form panels within panels
Thats left it looking like everything is happening behind a bunch of half opened blinds
Will it turn out any better after the liberal pouring of a lot of black ink?
Find out tomorrow